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a reverie……….

August8


Like a butterfly,
I long for you..
MY Petal of rose……
and my heart
thumps twice that of
a cuckoo clock………
Nonstop it goes
tick tock…
Tick Tock!!

With eyes closed
Star gazing in daylight
Lost in your thoughts
All my sentiments collide
Right from your blush
To the roll in the hay
An amorous jazz
Like the sound of a fountain
All my jitters play

A tune… A song
A melody to which
like a silly golden fish
I dream and dance
In eternal romance!!

Just when………
your smell divine
Fresh n Crisp
like the forest green
or the Hush
Blowing on the beach
sketch me a sunset serene…..

you Near me good….

….. and whisper to me..
Up and close…
In a voice…
like a car SQUASHING an orange…
and all my emotions OOZE out
like a BLEEDING RAINBOW of mixed feelings

‘I love you boy’
you say!!
and then…..
you drill me hard…
DEEP inside….
‘But……….’
like a jet crashing
to a tower
your voice gets drowned…
And I in your
in your charm and power!!

YES…
the earth rotates
for the first time i feel
and like your cat
i meow back to you

‘Dont peel your reasons!!’

‘My love for you
or your for me
is much much more than
a changing season….’

‘lets keeep it this way..’
……….
……….

i will always love you….
……….irrespective
of all else’…. if’s….
or whatever you say!!

………..and may be..
someday………..!!!

you never know…

miracles do happen!!!

they say…….

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Random muse….. totally…. not what i wanted it to be…. nevertheless.. i thought i ll post this….
Open to thy criticism :) Be kind! ;)

4 Comments to

“a reverie……….”

  1. On August 8th, 2009 at 8:02 pm Vinay Says:

    say nave, i think u can write an epic soon… the reverie is beautiful bro!

    My love for you
    or your for me
    is much much more than
    a changing season….’

    loved these lines! :)

  2. On August 9th, 2009 at 10:53 am neha Says:

    hey i liked it too! it really does seem straight from the heart.. and that’s the kinda poetry i feel a poet enjoys the most..wonderful work :)

  3. On August 11th, 2009 at 12:01 am admin Says:

    @Vinay
    :) Thank you brother!! :) good surprise to see you here :) and your posts are far nearer to the epic like quality than my silly blabber :) ….. and it is something which not just me but many feel :) Amias is one of em.. and I totally agree to that :)

  4. On August 11th, 2009 at 12:02 am admin Says:

    @Neha

    Thank you Neha for your time and read :) glad you enjoyed it alike :)

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