Comments on: Cockroaches…

By: admin

admin — Tue, 26 May 2009 06:44:52 +0000

@Bard

Brother… These are not my sentiments for sure.. and i pray that it hold goods for no one. It is just another way to do the prompt here .. Nothing more.

By: admin

admin — Wed, 13 May 2009 13:05:08 +0000

To punch all these in the context of cockroaches do and be.. i experimented with one the lines i love most…

Cornered there,
Outbid I feel;
Cabalist, you think I am?

Kamikaze u make me;
Riding the stormy sky.

Oak blight louse,
Addicted to you, I am.

Cameled to the unknown
Headless i feel.. Yet

Echoes all over, in my head.
“She thinks… I am one of her.”

COCKROACHES !!?? eeww ??!!??

By: admin

admin — Tue, 12 May 2009 19:38:41 +0000

@Amias
glad u liked it Amias… to look at it from a different perspective… it aint so bad to be someone’s cockroach as well

By: admin

admin — Tue, 12 May 2009 19:34:54 +0000

@Anthony
Thank you sir.. appreciate your inputs… God bless !!

By: admin

admin — Tue, 12 May 2009 19:34:20 +0000

@Meanie
smart cookie u are…

By: Amias

Amias — Mon, 11 May 2009 23:19:26 +0000

I agree with Anthony, I like the first one .. but this one is unique!

By: BARD OF MUMBAI

BARD OF MUMBAI — Mon, 11 May 2009 15:45:53 +0000

“COCKROACHES !!?? eeww ??!!??”..good 2c tat u echo my sentiments dude

Else,thanks 4 reading mine

By: Anthony North

Anthony North — Mon, 11 May 2009 14:08:45 +0000

I think your 2nd attempt is better – more compact – but both good.

By: Winnie the poohi

Winnie the poohi — Mon, 11 May 2009 12:31:08 +0000

ur last sentence says it all

COCKROACHES !!?? eeww ??!!??