Cockroaches…

May11

Cornered there,
Outbid I feel;
Cabalist, you think I am?

Kamikaze u make me;
Riding the stormy sky.

Oak blight louse,
Addicted to you, I am.

Cameled to the Saharas
Haunted by illusions.

Echo all over, in my head.
“She thinks… I am one of her.”

COCKROACHES !!?? eeww ??!!??

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My second attempt to the prompt Cockroaches prompted at Acrostic Only run by sweet Amias.

This attempt relies on a totally different method. Dunno if you ll like it but the temptation of the idea was exciting to take on. Check the first attempt here.

posted under Cherishing Life, My Frankenstein Lab, Personal Thoughts, PunchBag

9 Comments to

“Cockroaches…”

On May 11th, 2009 at 6:01 pm Winnie the poohi Says:
ur last sentence says it all

COCKROACHES !!?? eeww ??!!??
On May 11th, 2009 at 7:38 pm Anthony North Says:
I think your 2nd attempt is better – more compact – but both good.
On May 11th, 2009 at 9:15 pm BARD OF MUMBAI Says:
“COCKROACHES !!?? eeww ??!!??”..good 2c tat u echo my sentiments dude

Else,thanks 4 reading mine
On May 12th, 2009 at 4:49 am Amias Says:
I agree with Anthony, I like the first one .. but this one is unique!
On May 13th, 2009 at 1:04 am admin Says:
@Meanie
smart cookie u are…
On May 13th, 2009 at 1:04 am admin Says:
@Anthony
Thank you sir.. appreciate your inputs… God bless !!
On May 13th, 2009 at 1:08 am admin Says:
@Amias
glad u liked it Amias… to look at it from a different perspective… it aint so bad to be someone’s cockroach as well
On May 13th, 2009 at 6:35 pm admin Says:
To punch all these in the context of cockroaches do and be.. i experimented with one the lines i love most…

Cornered there,
Outbid I feel;
Cabalist, you think I am?

Kamikaze u make me;
Riding the stormy sky.

Oak blight louse,
Addicted to you, I am.

Cameled to the unknown
Headless i feel.. Yet

Echoes all over, in my head.
“She thinks… I am one of her.”

COCKROACHES !!?? eeww ??!!??
On May 26th, 2009 at 12:14 pm admin Says:
@Bard

Brother… These are not my sentiments for sure.. and i pray that it hold goods for no one. It is just another way to do the prompt here .. Nothing more.