Opportunity…

April18

One’s Onions,
Peeled For
Pandora’s Lair.

Objectives Inhabit,
Reasons For-seen.
Tame Emotions.

Umbel Ticks,
Naive Interpretations;
Iambic Mentations.
Temptations;
Yell Eureka !!!

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When I wrote and shared it with Winnie(aka Meanie), she said I should also share the thought process and so here it is. This poem is about the times when we have an opportunity knocking at the door and the action is yet to be taken, its about the evolutionary ideation and cerebration, that leads to the war-like preparation for the green go; to attempt the opportunity and nail it.

It starts with talking about knowing our prized possesions, our strength and weaknesses and how we ready ourselves for the Pandora’s Lair, knowing not what and who’s gonna come out of it; lions or liars or leaders. We nest our feelings with our own reasons; nurture our objectives and tame our emotions towards the goal. We do everything necessary, to seek it, hunt it down and fancy our chances. And as the idea settles; thoughts like short flower stalks bloom; ticking with excitement and life; come out of the umbelliferrous vision illusion; of what may and may not happen. We think of every possible things in units of what it could be; and game of life like a chessboard… And with our own set of explanations, interpretations and rendering for the moves, even before we actually make it, we convince ourselves to say ‘Eureka !!! This is it.’ — my Opportunity………

Hope you like it. Now that you have read it. Just a question.. Do you see something Ask me if you don’t.

posted under Cherishing Life, My Frankenstein Lab, Personal Thoughts, PunchBag

25 Comments to

“Opportunity…”

On April 18th, 2009 at 11:12 am Amias Says:
Almost perfect Nave! Flows so well.

The wonderful thing about an acrostic is that you can write a book with one word. It removed the waste, and allows the reader to focus on the topic — the message, that is.

I love your dialogue, as to me, it seems a good teaching tool. One should never miss an opportunity to enlighten ones friends.

But the word looks wrong. I think the “t” is missing. Maybe it’s my old eyes. That said, what else did I miss?
On April 18th, 2009 at 12:01 pm admin Says:
@Amias

Thank you for pointing that out Amias… It almost got skipped when restored a previous revision of the post before publishing… the word Temptations was lost in the process Thank you Amias !!!

If you notice its a double column acrostic that says

One’s Onions,
Peeled For
Pandora’s Lair.

Objectives Inhabit,
Reasons For-seen.
Tame Emotions.

Umbel Ticks,
Naive Interpretations;
Iambic Mentations;
Temptations;
Yell Eureka !!!

OPPORTUNITY OF LIFETIME !!!

Thank you
On April 18th, 2009 at 12:08 pm Amias Says:
Yes, I SEE IT!

Now one more thing, the “t” is in the wrong place.
On April 18th, 2009 at 12:23 pm admin Says:
my bad … i guess thats the reason why our parents tell us not to do things in haste … rushing to the finish line is often dangerous.. but an opportunity can be so tempting that sometimes we miscalculate

Double Thanks Amias !!! You have been very supportive and you have eye for everything which is a blessing for me

Have corrected the positioning Thank you so much
On April 18th, 2009 at 12:30 pm Amias Says:
Your talent dear friend, never ceases to amaze me. You are indeed a wonderful teacher.
On April 18th, 2009 at 3:32 pm Anthony North Says:
A powerful write. You’ve used those words very well.
On April 18th, 2009 at 10:42 pm americanising desi Says:
ah the flow and the attempt!
this has been an amazing read!
On April 18th, 2009 at 10:58 pm Maggie Says:
I guess I am blind…please point out to me the double acrostic.
On April 18th, 2009 at 11:26 pm admin Says:
@Amias

am humbled by your comments Amias
On April 18th, 2009 at 11:26 pm admin Says:
@Anthony

Thank you sire!
On April 18th, 2009 at 11:27 pm admin Says:
@Seher

glad you liked it dear thanks
On April 18th, 2009 at 11:29 pm admin Says:
@Maggie

Its a double column acrostic Maggie.. See below.

One’s Onions,
Peeled For
Pandora’s Lair.

Objectives Inhabit,
Reasons For-seen.
Tame Emotions.

Umbel Ticks,
Naive Interpretations;
Iambic Mentations;
Temptations;
Yell Eureka !!!

OPPORTUNITY OF LIFETIME !!!
On April 19th, 2009 at 7:19 am Write Girl Says:
Wonderful poem. I enjoyed the read.
On April 19th, 2009 at 12:53 pm Yamini Meduri Says:
it was nice reading you….the acro nicely done.!!!

check out mine from the link in the AO…!!!

Have a great time friend..!!!
On April 19th, 2009 at 6:38 pm vinay Says:
*bows*

nave is so brilliant! he doubles the pleasure of reading his works by making it a double column beauty!

superb!
On April 20th, 2009 at 2:49 am Winnie the poohi Says:
You know what I think about this one
On April 21st, 2009 at 12:24 am Tan Says:
A Double Column Acrostic??? Why didnt I think of it as yet?? WOW … Wonderful… Thankfully I read it after the ‘T’ was added… I’m happy to have read it though…

You gave me a new thought… thanks for it… keep writing
On April 21st, 2009 at 7:12 am admin Says:
@WriteGirl

Thank you dear
On April 21st, 2009 at 7:13 am admin Says:
@WriteGirl

Thank you dear and Welcome to the blog
On April 21st, 2009 at 7:15 am admin Says:
@Yamini

Thank you Yamini and WELCOME !!

I have read you on Vinay’s blog already, I do know that you write really well.. I shall check your blog soon Am caught up with some work but I shall visit yours very soon

Have a great week ahead
On April 21st, 2009 at 7:16 am admin Says:
@Vinay

humbled by your response buddy .. Thank you
On April 21st, 2009 at 7:16 am admin Says:
@Winnie

No doubt about that You know too much
On April 21st, 2009 at 7:19 am admin Says:
@Tan

Thanks pal

… n You should try it sometime.. It ll be interesting to read your take looking forward to it
On April 22nd, 2009 at 8:45 pm Ofira Sephiroth Says:
This is awesome. You’ve outdone yourself and flow is very well maintained throughout the whole poem.
On April 23rd, 2009 at 1:52 am admin Says:
@Ofira
Thank you Ofira.. overwhelmed by your response glad u liked it