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H is for.. Hangover

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Neath the star-lit sky,
Under the moonlight shower.
Lounging on the mat of grass,
Among the scented flowers.

The breeze caresses our thoughts;
And we gaze at the stars above.
As emotions jazz to our significance,
Resonates the MUSIC OF LOVE !

Revering our castle in air;
My hand reaches for you my DESTINY.
Drawing you closer in my arms,
Playing the moment like a symphony !

Just when a meeky flower,
Gazing at the brightest star,
SIGHS… longing for its lover,
Sitting in the sky so far.

It exudes its finest fragrance;
That would breach all its confines.
A feel so intoxicating;
That would beat the finest wines;

As it blooms in all its glory;
It did the moment seize.
The aroma it oozes out,
Shudders even the cool breeze.

It screams.. Sashays.. and dance
Erect and proud it stands.
Breathing the scented air,
Gyrates in spiritual romance.

Romancing to the glory;
Standing so very proud.
I envy that feeling abound,
As if deprived to mark my love,
“I love you” – I shout aloud.

My partner looks surprised.
Astonished to the fact,
Mystified, she chuckles,
“Now that was subtle impact !”
“But here its just you and me darling”
“Why such a random act?”

Addled.. Jumbled.. Mixed up
With whatever I say,
I fuddle up but try to charm,
And whisper it right away.
“The twinkle in your eyes darling!
Like the cosmic ray;
Those venture deep inside
And just do something on its way.”

“Intrigued, enchanted I feel
These are driving me nuts!”
Curious, surprised, she looks
But now comes no if’s or but’s

She whispers them back to me;
Confides those magic words.
Kidnapping me in a tight embrace
A unison of its own accord.

Squeezed.. Pleased by this gesture;
I ogle at the flower,
Boastful of my possession.
Conceited.. I won a war!

The flower leans aside;
Still zapped, zilched with pride.
It textures me with feelings;
As all my thoughts collide.

Its aroma.. Its beauty.. Its nectar..
To my love; how can i compare?
Its love for its beloved,
Its more than just love there!

Until now uncapable of seeing;
How it made it a better being;
In the world that it abides.
Whereas my love was so impure;
Stained with envy and pride

To right my wrongs as I was taught.
In hatred as i grew;
Forged a reality in my mind, of love,
And dared all false to true.

I want a better me,
Covetous, now is all over;
I feel blessed,
As i come out re-born;
Of this construed love HANGOVER.

A fantasy.. the mirage of love;
Now all has changed for good.
Some unsaid wisdom in the night;
That were once misunderstood.

The grass is still green;
The sky still blue.
Now fantasy became reality,
And reality became you.

I oh so love you still darling;
Is all i have to say.
May you remain happy for ever,
And ever, is all I pray.

Not that if you are not with me;
Would make it all so sour.
You ll always make a better me, I know,
Yes ..now.. I am that flower!

And YOU .. my brightest star!!
And YOU .. my brightest star!!

Written for ABC Wednesday prompt H is for …..

I chose H is for .. Hangover. Have worked on my post D is for… Destiny and have given it a totally new bend .. Let me know what you think of this :)

7 Comments to

“H is for.. Hangover”

  1. On March 15th, 2009 at 2:05 pm Sparrow Says:

    Felt every bit of it ….every bit of it..the energy..the zest..the re-birth……ocean of love you are :)

    I oh so love you still darling;
    Is all i have to say.
    May you remain happy for ever,
    And ever, is all I pray.

  2. On March 15th, 2009 at 3:08 pm Sana Says:

    You turned my barren land,
    Into a splendiferous paradise,
    Your scent that lingers over me,
    Will forever keep me mesmerized.

    Not that if you are not with me;
    Would make it all so sour.
    You ll always make a better me, I know,
    I know my beautiful flower!

  3. On March 16th, 2009 at 3:25 am admin Says:

    :) Hugs !! God bless ya :)

  4. On March 17th, 2009 at 10:42 am Winnie the poohi Says:

    umm this is toooo long! but i guess its all coz of ur hangover :P

    Well love hangover.. never leaves so beware.. once is enuf u get addicted :)

  5. On March 17th, 2009 at 10:54 am admin Says:

    hmm .. yea this write got too long i guess … :) thank you for your read :)

  6. On March 17th, 2009 at 2:15 pm Di Says:

    They heave me up and drop me down,
    Taking me in the whirlpool all around!

    Nice one. I almost hoped it would be a ballad, but presumptuous me! A pleasant read, nevertheless!

  7. On March 18th, 2009 at 5:57 am admin Says:

    :) thank you so much Divya for your kind words .. and lovely couplet.. you breathe poetry it seems :)

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