G is for … Goodbye

March4

Arched rainbow;
Parched sun..
Showered with blessings.
Falls in love !!
Like charges fired
To lose all marbles.

Elbows greased.
Gearing towards;
End or beginning,
I know not what.
Saline sudation;
Trickling down the crystal;
Washing away all dirt.
An attempt… to
Condense hereafter !
Falls steep !!
Banished..
Like Charges discharged ..
Outpours..

A breakup for an affair
That never was..

A gallant.. Garnished Goodbye !

This funny punny take on tears .. the saga of a tear how and what gives it birth and how it bids goodbye

Written for a prompt at ABC Wednesday

posted under Cherishing Life, My Frankenstein Lab, Personal Thoughts, PunchBag

14 Comments to

“G is for … Goodbye”

On March 4th, 2009 at 2:14 am Pat Says:
Well done. Interesting take on Goodbye.
On March 4th, 2009 at 2:32 am sylvia Says:
A great G for Grin, thanks for sharing! I love it!
On March 4th, 2009 at 5:00 am babooshka Says:
G for great too.
On March 4th, 2009 at 5:01 am photowannabe Says:
Fascinating Goodbye for an affair that never was. Good stuff.
On March 4th, 2009 at 8:57 am admin Says:
@Patricia

Thank you Pat Welcome to my blog
On March 4th, 2009 at 8:59 am admin Says:
@Sylvia @Babooshka @Photowannabe

G for Gracias !!! Thank you all
On March 4th, 2009 at 10:41 am Tumblewords Says:
Very cleverly done – the tracking of a tear. Great job!
On March 4th, 2009 at 4:35 pm brinkbeestinenglish Says:
oriGinal!
On March 4th, 2009 at 5:47 pm admin Says:
@Tumblewords @Original

Thank you !! value and appreciate your presence God Bless !!
On March 4th, 2009 at 8:43 pm Sherrie Says:
Hi!
Great “G” post. Wonder poem! Have a great day!!

Sherrie
On March 4th, 2009 at 8:54 pm Sparrow Says:
Gorgeous
On March 5th, 2009 at 2:41 pm admin Says:
@Sherrie @Sparrow

Thank you !! Cheers !!
On March 5th, 2009 at 5:05 pm Amias Says:
Goodbyes, when one doesn’t want it, makes one cry. Yes, tears can be traced, and you did it well …
On March 5th, 2009 at 8:53 pm admin Says:
@Amias

i so agree to that .. i believe there should be no exits at all .. sadly life aint so fair ! Thank you for your visit value and appreciate your presence