On the rocks…
May2
On the rocks I sit,
Thinking of you.
Which is something,
That I often do.
Cherishing the moments,
Sitting on the beach.
Celebrating each thought,
Out of world’s reach.
With every Wave,
Hitting the sand.
I wish you were here,
To hold my hand.
Treasuring the sea-shells,
While putting it in the jar.
I realise,
When noone else is there for me. You are
I wonder,
How you make me feel inside.
To Love you,
Brings me so much pride.
I love you deeper,
Than the earth’s core.
Yet with every passing second,
I love you more.
You are the beauty,
The charm I am missing.
I wish you were here,
And we were kissing.
When everything seems blown.
Out of line.
I come here. Witness you.
And everything’s fine
HI
you wrote FANTASTIC..
i like your poetry
ON THE ROCKS
its really rocking…….
hey nave….. wat beatiful poems i have jus fallen in love with them n i guess even with the poet….. wanna have contact with u wat say dear……
Hi schiff .. Thank you for such kind words
It really means a lot to me.
And I would love to get in touch with you. You can reach me at dutta.navin@gmail.com
hey i’m a student… a bit busy these days with xams …. i would love to talk to u ….. let these get over i’l contact u… hope u understand…..
hi Schiff ..
n All the very best for your exams !!! Cheers !! Take care … 
Yes, I do understand. Take your sweet time, I ll wait.
Simple, yet put across in a touching way!
My fav lines:
Celebrating each thought,
Out of world’s reach.
Keep writing! =)
Thank you for the lovely comment NT !!